past story

The example of using passive voice in past story.

“Embarrassed moment"

Seven years ago, I was 12 years old. My friends and I were playing on the backyard. A game of hide and seek was played by us. We played very happily. Until it was me turned to look for them. I was looking for them one by one and managed to find it. However, one of my friend named Ayu was very clever in hiding. I could not find her. Then I kept looking for her. I remembered that, a blue shirt and black pants was being worn by Ayu.

 As the kid was passed by me, a kid was seen by me wearing a blue shirt and black pants. Without thinking, I immadiatelly approached her. After getting close, she was taken by me to my friends. I wanted to tell them that I had managed to find her. However, I became silent, when Ayu was seen by me was near my friends.

She greeted, ”Hey why did not you find me?” I was confused. Then I saw my friends laught. Then I looked to the children who I drag from near the statue, I was suprised that it was not Ayu, but she was someone else wearing the same clothes. I was looked by the girl with disgust. All of my friends there were laughing at me. I was embarrased. I wanted to run out of there. Finally, I apologized to her and went home with my friends.

well, I think thats enough about my story. See you in the next post